Damon
Mr.Zach
Class 3A
9/9/14
Draft 1
“Learner profile: Qian Li Liu”
Today, I learned a lot about my classmate Qian Li Liu and his English name is Charlie and he is from Zhe Jiang, China. He has been America for one year. He lives in White Stone with his grandmother. He is a nice guy as I have thought, but he is taciturn. No one smokes in my class but Charlie does, so we have got closer. This is his first semester and I think his English is pretty good. He wants to get into the college and he wants to realize his dream. A part of his dream is meeting as many different girls as he can in the college. These are all I have got for now and I guess we will be a good partner. It was nice to meet him.
Mr.Zach
Class 3A
9/9/14
Draft 1
“Learner profile: Qian Li Liu”
Today, I learned a lot about my classmate Qian Li Liu and his English name is Charlie and he is from Zhe Jiang, China. He has been America for one year. He lives in White Stone with his grandmother. He is a nice guy as I have thought, but he is taciturn. No one smokes in my class but Charlie does, so we have got closer. This is his first semester and I think his English is pretty good. He wants to get into the college and he wants to realize his dream. A part of his dream is meeting as many different girls as he can in the college. These are all I have got for now and I guess we will be a good partner. It was nice to meet him.
Damon
Mr.Zach
9/10/2014
Draft 2
Advice for English Learner
Learning English is difficult; but it is a skill that can be learned. English is the language most people use in the world. Here is some advice for you. Talking to people is one of the most efficient ways to learn English. For example, if you are Chinese and there is no one else who speaks Chinese, the environment pushes you to speak English. It can improve your pronunciation and listening, and it can also make you more confident. For the people who are really shy, I would suggest learning English when you listen to music or watch movies because you can learn a lot of vocabulary and common expressions, and even some professional words. Even though learning English is a hell of a thing, you will be proud of yourself when you master English.
Mr.Zach
9/10/2014
Draft 2
Advice for English Learner
Learning English is difficult; but it is a skill that can be learned. English is the language most people use in the world. Here is some advice for you. Talking to people is one of the most efficient ways to learn English. For example, if you are Chinese and there is no one else who speaks Chinese, the environment pushes you to speak English. It can improve your pronunciation and listening, and it can also make you more confident. For the people who are really shy, I would suggest learning English when you listen to music or watch movies because you can learn a lot of vocabulary and common expressions, and even some professional words. Even though learning English is a hell of a thing, you will be proud of yourself when you master English.
Damon
Mr.Zach
9/17/14
Draft 4
Kids
This chapter is about the author has experienced some accident happened to kids. According to the author, kids are totally different with adults. Sometimes they are very weak, but sometimes they just amazingly get recover and even make Doctors surprise. Evidently, children get hurt or sick naturally. But adults, even a healthy man, they sick in many different cases. For example, smoking and drinking alcohol.
Response
This story reminds me to think about my friend Tom. Tom is my good friend and he is a naughty boy. In that time, we both were 13 year old. That was a particular morning, we went to play badminton. Suddenly, he fell down and his hands got hurt. I sent him to hospital and he had a surgery. There were many patients in the hospital, mostly were adults. Some of them hurt more than my friend, but just two days after, my friend acted like never been hurt. He healed so fast, the doctor who did surgery for him said he had to wait two months, but he completely healed one month. And I agree with the author, Kids recover themselves very fast.
Mr.Zach
9/17/14
Draft 4
Kids
This chapter is about the author has experienced some accident happened to kids. According to the author, kids are totally different with adults. Sometimes they are very weak, but sometimes they just amazingly get recover and even make Doctors surprise. Evidently, children get hurt or sick naturally. But adults, even a healthy man, they sick in many different cases. For example, smoking and drinking alcohol.
Response
This story reminds me to think about my friend Tom. Tom is my good friend and he is a naughty boy. In that time, we both were 13 year old. That was a particular morning, we went to play badminton. Suddenly, he fell down and his hands got hurt. I sent him to hospital and he had a surgery. There were many patients in the hospital, mostly were adults. Some of them hurt more than my friend, but just two days after, my friend acted like never been hurt. He healed so fast, the doctor who did surgery for him said he had to wait two months, but he completely healed one month. And I agree with the author, Kids recover themselves very fast.
Damon
Zach
09/23/14
Draft 1
Arthur
Arthur is a good partner for Peter. Mostly Arthur drives the ambulance and he races sometime. He is a nudist. He plays naked tennis and naked volleyball and drinks iced tea naked in the Bare Bottoms Bar. Arthur is married and his wife works as a hairdresser. He is a strong, has a good work ethic. He is a good listener for Peter and very patience.
In my opinion Arthur is a maniac; however, he is a nice guy. Peter is lazy and don’t like to drive. But Arthur likes to drive. I think they have perfect combination. Something Peter doesn’t want to do, Arthur would do it. They complain each other but they trust each other completely when they work.
Zach
09/23/14
Draft 1
Arthur
Arthur is a good partner for Peter. Mostly Arthur drives the ambulance and he races sometime. He is a nudist. He plays naked tennis and naked volleyball and drinks iced tea naked in the Bare Bottoms Bar. Arthur is married and his wife works as a hairdresser. He is a strong, has a good work ethic. He is a good listener for Peter and very patience.
In my opinion Arthur is a maniac; however, he is a nice guy. Peter is lazy and don’t like to drive. But Arthur likes to drive. I think they have perfect combination. Something Peter doesn’t want to do, Arthur would do it. They complain each other but they trust each other completely when they work.
Damon
Mr.Zach
Class3A
9/29/14
Classification Essay
What are some interesting jobs? What kind of jobs do most people want to have? There are many different kinds of jobs and it basically depends on different personal interests and goals. Here are some common jobs.
First, there are problem solving jobs. These are great jobs. People who work at problem solving center, they all have the same goal and it is human happiness. They help people solve the problems and research the solutions. On the other hand, it is a dangerous job because the workers usually touch chemicals and it might cause some diseases. To be a problem solving person, you need to have some skills like critical thinking and good memory. You need to experience many different things. Sometimes workers need to work over time, but when they create something or solve a problem for our life, people will really appreciate with it and would be proud of them.
Second, the other interesting jobs are artistic jobs. Many people like art and create things artistically. Some people create music, some people create pictures and some people created unique art products. It can be an interesting job. Even though the job has a lower income, and many people still do it. Actually art is not easy, it is a kind of inherent skill. Although there are a lot of artists, only a few of them have succeeded.
Lastly, there is a difficulty job, it is mechanic. Basically they are building the world. They make cars, huge facilities and electronic devices. You need to do a lot of work, and cautiously. Also it is a dangerous job, so you need to practice a lot. You need to remember all the parts of the product, and know how to build it exactly. And learn how to use machines and drives. On the other hand, you can create some inventions for you or people.
There are many jobs in the world, most people want to do the jobs which is they are interested. But some time we couldn’t get what we want. However, try to discover your talent and enjoy, you will like these jobs.
Mr.Zach
Class3A
9/29/14
Classification Essay
What are some interesting jobs? What kind of jobs do most people want to have? There are many different kinds of jobs and it basically depends on different personal interests and goals. Here are some common jobs.
First, there are problem solving jobs. These are great jobs. People who work at problem solving center, they all have the same goal and it is human happiness. They help people solve the problems and research the solutions. On the other hand, it is a dangerous job because the workers usually touch chemicals and it might cause some diseases. To be a problem solving person, you need to have some skills like critical thinking and good memory. You need to experience many different things. Sometimes workers need to work over time, but when they create something or solve a problem for our life, people will really appreciate with it and would be proud of them.
Second, the other interesting jobs are artistic jobs. Many people like art and create things artistically. Some people create music, some people create pictures and some people created unique art products. It can be an interesting job. Even though the job has a lower income, and many people still do it. Actually art is not easy, it is a kind of inherent skill. Although there are a lot of artists, only a few of them have succeeded.
Lastly, there is a difficulty job, it is mechanic. Basically they are building the world. They make cars, huge facilities and electronic devices. You need to do a lot of work, and cautiously. Also it is a dangerous job, so you need to practice a lot. You need to remember all the parts of the product, and know how to build it exactly. And learn how to use machines and drives. On the other hand, you can create some inventions for you or people.
There are many jobs in the world, most people want to do the jobs which is they are interested. But some time we couldn’t get what we want. However, try to discover your talent and enjoy, you will like these jobs.
Damon
Mr.Zach Oct 15, 2014 Process Essay Draft#3 How to Make a Projector Do you know how to make a projector by yourself and spend less money than the movie tickets? A regular movie ticket is approximately twenty dollars, but what if you can spend about fifteen dollars and experiences the same as the movie theater. Of course you can watch a lot of different movies with your boyfriend, girlfriend or family. Now let me tell you how to save money and watch the movies at the same time. Ask your father for some money and go to the grocery store. You will need a magnifying lens, scissors, tape, a knife, a pen, a shoe box and finally you need a smart phone that is able to play a movie. If you are ready, let’s move. First, break the magnifying lens then put the lens on the shoe box and use the pen to draw a circle, the circle has to be exactly the same size as the lens. Then use the knife to cut the circle out carefully. Second, use the tape and paste the lens on the inside of the box and match it with the circle. Then make sure it is tight enough and is stable. Next, Put the cell phone in the middle side of the box, and adjust the position and angle. After it is quietly working, use the phone case to fasten it tightly. By the way, the cell phone should be opposite in the case and the screen needs to be locked and because the phone screen light affects the quality of the movie. If it works perfectly, awesome! Connect the cell phone with the speakers. Be sure the cell phone has enough battery and the movie has a high definition. Then call your girlfriend or boyfriend to buy some popcorn and Pepsi, turn off the lights, then lie down and relax. Let's enjoy this fantastic moment. |